
Raven Crowe
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writing was good, I was getting into it would have liked an ending to it you stopped the story at the wrong place. just glad i didn't have to spend money on it and the placement of the stop makes me not want to buy any of the other for fear it will happen again. and it needs more editing for example in the beginning of the the book she's having a mental dialog with herself and states everyone knows of the 10 Black brothers but when she meets the mother later in the book she has no clue there are 10 Black brothers.

Rose DiFonso
another great book from the author. There was a few time Kiara annoyed me with her back and forth about whether to pursue a relationship with Adam. I think Adam was very patient and tried to figure out how to make Kiara see that they belonged together. there are a few grammatical errors, it's seems like this series has grammatical erros

ElaaraWylder
Couldn't get past the first few pages. if the grammar ar the start is so poor, then it doesn't look good for the rest of the book. a published book is not the place to learn your craft.