
Jualéne Maré
The storyline was very enjoyable. However... STOP USING THE LORD'S NAME IN VAIN - That includes: God, Lord (referring to God), Jesus, Christ, Holy Ghost, Holy Spirit, etc. When using the above in ecstasy, in sexual circumstances, in anger/etc., in any way as swear words, you need to STOP. STOP following the crowd or the modern-day popular speach pattern of ABUSING any of the above words. - It is NOT OK. "The Bible verse that forbids using the Lord's name in vain is Exodus 20:7: "You shall not take the name of the Lord your God in vain, for the Lord will not hold anyone guiltless who misuses His name"." ** Please rather concentrate on your very enjoyable writing style & storylines, instead of causing repeated negative associations & repeated misuse of the words that refer to The Lord God Almighty. **

Jessica Ellis
This was a beautiful short story. Billionaire and maid fall in love without the sex scenes that most books have. I loved it and for them to take on another couple's child was a tear jerker.
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