
Cisco L
Some grammer errors and one spelling error. I'm not an English teacher, I just noticed it. Also, they referred to Natsu Munakata as "he" over and over whe she is a female in both the WN and the anime. They fixed Makoto's siblings from the previous volumes. Makoto has two sisters, one older and the other younger. Didn't like the name " the wicked one" changed from Majin, and the footers at the end mention it. Should have kept it or changed it to Demon. Volume goes through the heros first battle with the Demons and introduced Sofia and lancer. thanks.

Zachary Parker
Disappointing. felt like 80% of the book wasn't even about the mc, and the entire fight scene could've been at the end of the last book with room to spare... Yes, the "main character" is 2 chapters of this book, centered around a single fight scene.