Inevitable Destiny: Part 1

It has a good storyline and plot but some of it just didn't make sense, I would say that's from all the mistakes through out the book. It's futuristic and makes sense with how the world seems to be heading, but its not so far in the future that you have to stretch your imagination to grasp it. The romance side of this story just wasn't there for me I would have liked to see the relationship blossom more than it did and for him to help her find the truth hope the author ties up the loose ends

Agree with previous poster - comes across as somewhat disorganized - but using a very novel and unique point of view would be hard to pull off for anyone. A good read and well worth the time. Appears to set up a follow on story quite well

It is far to religious for my taste, a lot of spelling errors, improper grammer, of grammatical errors, certain parts of the story feels either rushed, not completely conveyed, or not completely thought out. So I'm giving this book a 2 / 5.