
Ben Haylock
It's an entertaining read. Interesting scenarios and imaginative characters. It does have poor grammar, especially between characters dialogue. Overall it shows immaturity but it has a certain charm of insight at key points.

A Google user
Bought it, read it, and enjoyed it. Though I will admit the name is a bit off putting when friends or family ask what your reading. So I usually just called it shima 4.

A Google user
I read the sample and loved but I agree, I would buy it if you could change the name